*snoops in others comments* I love the "was"s, they add a hint of desperation, affirming that it was in the past, (but idk, I'm an annoying poet like that) ;) Anyway, I absolutely LOVE this piece! Short and sweet and sad and lovely. It got to my heart. Well done!
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Date: 2010-06-10 03:46 pm (UTC)I love the "was"s, they add a hint of desperation, affirming that it was in the past, (but idk, I'm an annoying poet like that) ;)
Anyway, I absolutely LOVE this piece! Short and sweet and sad and lovely. It got to my heart. Well done!