http://saharajara.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] saharajara.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] wave_of_sorrow 2010-05-02 11:57 pm (UTC)

Oh how marvelous! I love the first paragraph, spot-on.

also this,---ah my heart is keening "The salt of a hundred unshed tears and sweat will mingle on their cheeks and for all the pain, all the grief in years to come they will not regret it."

and the ending, perfect.

:)
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