Wow, wow, well done! This, to me, was a hard prompt to fill, but you did it beautifully! Poetic, even! You really made intimacy more than sex, and it was very touching. The ups and downs and the low blows and the romanticness of them in bed together,... their relationship was just so real and tangible, it was just very beautiful and well written! Fabulous job, my friend. ^^
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Date: 2010-05-22 03:15 am (UTC)